Friday, March 5, 2010
beginning
in the beginning of the book Jim and Claudine r wondering what a monument on an island near their house was used for and why its their and they want to go out to really bad the next day they go clam digging and while they are rowing out to the spot to dig they see to men fighting over a digging spot then they see one of the men stab another the other man with a clam digger and kills him then the alive one sees jim and claudine and chases them across the clam flat then they get stuck in some clay and they find out the guys name is baby bum and he says there stuck and hel let the tide take care of them the get out and tell the police and the police dont believe them so a couple months go by with out any sighting of baby bum then one day they go exploring and the come up to an old junky car and the that some one was living in it then baby bum jumps out and kocks out jim with a metal lunch box claudine hits him this a stick and her and jim run away and baby bum say him and his freinds are gunna kill them and their familys
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ReplyDeleteHey Julian--
ReplyDeleteFirst of all....make sure to use proper sentences and paragraphs, just as you would if you were writing a paper! There is not one period in your entire post!!
Secondly, this book seems to be right up your alley with clam-digging and all of that. Do you find you relate it to your life as a lobsterman at all? I know there are also lobster turf-wars that sound sort-of like the fighting in your book.
What do you think?