Friday, March 12, 2010
the next day jim and claudine go clam digging and they see what looked like a 1000 crabs on top of each other so they moved some of the crabs and it is the body of the dead man they are realy scared and and the state police come and they tell them they belive their story now they go clamming and the old lady that always rips them of gets mad at them and wont buy their clams so they decide to sell clams and the side of the rode and they almost double there money and other clammers start selling to them a phew weeks later they go to someone's house to ask them questions
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hi julian nice post
ReplyDeleteProper punctuation, Julian!!!
ReplyDeleteThere seems to be a few things going on in your book. Am I right in saying the murder might be the main plot and the boy's clam business might be a sub-plot?
Don't forget to add one of the four tools to each of your posts-- visualization, predication or connecting to your life or the world around you. This is your time to really practice getting better at reading!